tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3346627054933836284.post6701195167038023255..comments2022-03-10T00:52:00.547-08:00Comments on Ferrus Fair: Brainstorm session.Arcades Dolorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06474227337414058140noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3346627054933836284.post-87596934576555348842012-01-02T15:31:24.599-08:002012-01-02T15:31:24.599-08:00Now I've restarted reading these, some belated...Now I've restarted reading these, some belated and likely now-irrelevant thoughts:<br /><br />First, regarding Vercingetorix's story seeming stagnant, I would refer you to the Single Female Lawyer episode of Futurama, in which Fry writes an episode of the show, but only writes a couple minutes of it because "it took a half hour to write, I thought it'd take a half hour to read." At this point, this story has yet to feel stagnant...it may seem stagnant to you because you spend more time thinking about it and writing it than I (or any reader) spent reading it.<br /><br />Second, those other storylines also sound really cool.<br /><br />Third, I find your machine spirit characters to be the most unique and enjoyable characters in 40k fiction (not that I've read a lot of it...). The interactions between characters and the machine spirits offer opportunities for misunderstandings, which are a major engine of story progression in 40k (not to mention classic sources of hilarity), especially on the tabletop when you and most of your opponents play Imperium. :PDeimoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14509157415020223297noreply@blogger.com